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| My love and passion for Translation back the time when I was 12 years old. My Father did diploma in the Russian language and whenever he use to speak Russian I always got curious of being different like him. He is my Motivation and driving force as well. He suggested and guided me with all my choices in life. He always wanted to be an IAS Officer. My choice of learning German is very much affected by my Father knowing Russian. Becoming a Translator is my Short term Goal of Life. I want to achieve the success my Father desired. I want to crack the UPSC exam and be an IFS (Indian Foreign Servives Officer). After my Graduation I want to work in German Embassy This Summer Internship will help me grow and will get me closer to my desired achievement. It suits best to my Profile as I am a Student with highly motivated, dedicated and promising skills Currently, I am pursuing my Bachelor’s in German honours with Japanese as my extra language. Learning a new language is like living all over again. A language is a barrier between countries and knowing that you have a capability to break those barriers is impossible to describe. I not only enjoy studying German and Japanese I love it. So, I always want to stay grounded and connected to it. |
My love and passion for Translation back the time when I was 12 years old. My Father did diploma in the Russian language and whenever he used to speak Russian I always got curious about being different like him. He is my Motivation and driving force as well. He suggested and guided me through all my choices in life. He always wanted to be an IAS Officer. My choice of learning German is very much affected by my Father knowing Russian. Becoming a Translator is my Short-term Goal of Life. I want to achieve the success my Father desired. I want to crack the UPSC exam and be an IFS (Indian Foreign Service Officer). After my Graduation, I want to work in German Embassy. This Summer Internship will help me grow and will get me closer to my desired achievement. It suits best to my Profile as I am a Student with highly motivated, dedicated and promising skills. Currently, I am pursuing my Bachelor’s in German honours with Japanese as my extra language. Learning a new language is like living all over again. A language is a barrier between countries and knowing that you have a capability to break those barriers is impossible to describe. I not only enjoy studying German and Japanese I love it. So, I always want to stay grounded and connected to it. |
Use of tense and Preposition. Punctuation marks and incorrect spelling No error No error |
PROFESSIONAL PROFILE
| I am an Energetic and dedicated college student pursuing BA (H) German at Amity University, Noida. I am also studying Japanese as my extra language. I am truly interested in the field of language because My Father is a Russian language specialist and had always motivated me to follow his footsteps. I am a sincere and dedicated Individual who is punctual motivated towards achieving my goals. I did an Internship Program under an online shopping site named Wooplr and worked as a marketing agent, I made an Online Store of my own and sold their Products and also promoted the Website. Also, since May 2018 I registered myself as a German and Japanese Tutor on Superprof.co.in. I am a Polyglot by knowing four different languages- Hindi, English, German and Japanese. I have an In-depth knowledge of Hiragana and Katakana script of Japanese Language. I am well versed with the German Vocubulary related to History, Travel, Daily life, Academics and Sports. Things that interests me the most are German Literature and Sports. I enjoy reading the work of Bertolt Brecht the most and I am a district level Hockey Player. I have in my School time represented my School at various level like NCR, district, zonal, cluster, inter and intra-school. By being a part of My Hockey team, I learned the value of teamwork and that a team is never successful if they do not work as a Family. As a person who truly enjoys and cherish working with a team I am looking forward to working with Modlingua this Summer. At Modlingua my main focus is on enhancing my communication skills and shaping my entrepreneurial skills. |
I am an Energetic and dedicated college student pursuing BA (H) German at Amity University, Noida. I am also studying Japanese as my extra language. I am truly interested in the field of language because My Father is a Russian language specialist and had always motivated me to follow his footsteps. I am a sincere and dedicated Individual who is punctually motivated towards achieving my goals. I did an Internship Program under an online shopping site named Wooplr and worked as a marketing agent, I made an Online Store of my own and sold their Products and also promoted the Website. Also, since May 2018 I registered myself as a German and Japanese Tutor on Superprof.co.in. I am a Polyglot by knowing four different languages- Hindi, English, German and Japanese. I have an In-depth knowledge of Hiragana and Katakana script of Japanese Language. I am well versed with the German Vocabulary related to History, Travel, Daily life, Academics and Sports. Things that interest me the most are German Literature and Sports. I enjoy reading the work of Bertolt Brecht the most and I am a district level Hockey Player. I have in my School time represented my School at the various level like NCR, district, zonal, cluster, inter and intra-school. By being a part of My Hockey team, I learned the value of teamwork and that a team is never successful if they do not work as a Family. As a person who truly enjoys and cherishes working with a team, I am looking forward to working with Modlingua this Summer. At Modlingua my main focus is on enhancing my communication skills and shaping my entrepreneurial skills. |
No Error A grammatical error of conjugation No error No error Spelling Error Incorrect use of proper use of conjugations Word (THE) was missing. Conjugations and missing comma. |
Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 504 Total Number of Target Text: 504 |
Profile Picture quality- The Picture could have been an HD quality. Additional comments - The correct use of Preposition must be kept in mind. Time taken to correct 504 words: 30 minutes Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: 15 minutes |
