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Hello, my name is Sachin Kumar. I have just completed my Advanced Diploma in Portuguese language and Literature from Department of Germanic and Romance Studies of University of Delhi. 

I have already done my Intensive Advance Diploma in Portuguese Language from same Department of University of Delhi.
And I have also done my Graduation in Bachelor of Science in Botany (Hon.) from KirroriMal College, University of Delhi. I have been an NCC Cadet during my college days and also received C Certificates, Pre RDCs, many Certificates.

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Hello, my name is Sachin Kumar. I have just completed my Advanced Diploma in Portuguese language and Literature from Department of Germanic and Romance Studies of the University of Delhi. 

 I have already done my Intensive Advance Diploma in the Portuguese Language from same Department of the University of Delhi. 
And i have also done my Graduation in Bachelor of Science in Botany (Hon.) from KirroriMal College, University of Delhi. I have been an NCC Cadet during my college days and also received C Certificates, Pre RDCs, many Certificates.

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Being an average student I have always tried to learn different things apart from academics. I am always keen to work in every sector wherein I could improve my language skills, I am curious and positive person it is the reason for which I choose studying and working in foreign language. 

I like to communicate with other natives and I like helping them to communicate.
I am a hard working student and would really like to work as an intern for Modlingua to learn something new.

Career Goals

My main dream is to become a Translator and Interpreter and would like to help people to communicate and to overpass linguistic and cultural barriers. I would like to find a stable job that allows me to keep trained with language .




Being an average student i have always tried to learn different things apart from academics. I am always keen to work in every sector wherein i could improve my language skills. I am a curious and positive person, it is the reason for which i choose studying and working in a foreign language.


 I like to communicate with other natives and i like helping them to communicate.
I am a hard working student and would really like to work as an intern for Modlingua to learn something new.



My main dream is to become a Translator and Interpreter and would like to help people to communicate and to overpass linguistic and cultural barriers. I would like to find a stable job that allows me to keep trained with language .





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The job could be teaching language at University, work for translating Company, in an Embassy, where I could stay in touch with multicultural reality and improve my linguistic skills together with my knowledge of other culture. Now, my main focus is on Portuguese studies and I also intend to do Masters in Portuguese.

I think that working with language is a passion, I got from my teachers. I have always been interested in languages, communications, cultures, and traveling, and have thus decide to focuses on my career, where I can combine all four of my interests.I want to learn languages and cultures in deep by my heart.

I am looking forward to summer internship program, which is providing to language professionals to acquire knowledge and experience in the fields of Translations and I interpretation.






The job could be teaching language at University, work for translating Company, in an Embassy, where i could stay in touch with multicultural reality and improve my linguistic skills together with my knowledge of other culture. Now, my main focus is on Portuguese studies and I also intend to do Masters in Portuguese.

I think that working with language is a passion, i got from my teachers. I have always been interested in languages, communications, cultures, and traveling. And have thus decided to focuses on my career, where i can combine all four of my interests. I want to learn languages and cultures in deep "by my heart".

I am looking forward to summer internship program, which is providing to language professionals to acquire knowledge and experience in the fields of Translations and Interpretation.







Use small letters.






Use correct grammer and small latter.





Use small letters.





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