Version 1- Draft Version                                                              Version 2- Corrected Version                                                    Comments/ Types of errors

1.PROFILE PHOTO
The profile photo is original.                                                  The profile photo is cropped, applied filters,                           The profile picture is not the size of 250 x 250                                                                                                            resized.                                                                                     pixel.
                                                                                                  
2. BRIEF PROFILE

I had bought variety of bracelets from                                    I bought a variety of bracelets from my hometown in India     No need to use the past participle in the sentence.
my hometown in India and then sold those bracelets to         and sold those bracelets to friends,...
friends,...
                                                                 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                
In June 2017, a member from my community trusted me...   In June 2017, a member of my community trusted me...          Wrong usage of preposition.


From 3rd April 2018, I am working for                                 From 3rd April 2018, I am working on                                       Wrong usage of preposition.
Clockwork Captions.                                                             Clockwork Captions.

3. CAREER GOALS
providing grammmatically correct translation...                    providing grammatically correct translation...                             Spelling mistake.

Error Analysis:
Total number of source text: 311
Total number of  Target text: 309
Errors related to articles: 0
Errors related to punctuation, spaces, symbols, signs; 0
Spelling Errors: 1
Choice of words and overall consistency of those words: 4
Page Layout and Overall Presentation: N/A
Time Taken to Correct the mistakes: 15 minutes
Time Taken to prepare this evaluation report: 60 minutes