Version 1-Draft version Corrected version Comments/types of errors  I have 5-7 years of French learning behind me and have obtained an A1 DELF degree from Alliance Francaise. 7 years of French learning with me   Being precise .The exact number has been  mentioned  instead of an approximation.   . I play the synthesizer too and have performed during various cultural events And have been given the opportunity to perform at various cultural events.   Better sentence construction for added clarity.   risk and initiatives. I presently know English, Hindi, French, Bengali and Portuguese basics.  Risks and initiatives have a command over English, Hindi, French Bengali and Portuguese     Plurals. Addition of commas and spaces between the languages     with it a revolution of a new culture. Multilingual in the process of  Revelation Multilinguals     Appropriate vocabulary has been added.Plurality of word was missing hence corrected. As for me, language learning is an ever-growing asset in the current scenario. “Language learning” or learning a language   Better sentence construction has been made for enhanced coherency. . I will explain this my own personal experience. Deleted   Not required ‘Hindi’ and ‘English’ Hindi and English   Inverted commas have been subtracted as not required. Multilingual can see their own culture from a new perspective and are able to compare, contrast cultures Multiliguals   The plurality of the word was missing. Being an undergraduate student but with a considerable knowledge of the subject am currently teaching a 6 yr old UK based girl French.   Being an undergraduate student but with a considerable knowledge of the subject ,I am currently teaching a 6 yr old UK based girl French.   Subject was missing and hence added for coherence.Proper spacing and commas have been included. , I had been given the opportunity to attend presidential summit during the visit of  I was given the opportunity to attend a/the presidential summit.   Better sentence construction. with full enthusiasm and utmost dedication and fulfil my responsibilities Fulfill my responsibilities Spelling mistake rectified.