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| Being a Commerce student at school |
Being a Commerce student at the school |
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| mix of Art and Commerce |
a mix of Art and Commerce |
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| I love reading articles of all themes |
I love reading articles on all themes |
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| I am keen on taking up the internship project with your organization of such great repute and enter into professional world of the field of languages. |
I am keen on taking up the internship project with your organization of such great repute and enter into the professional world of the field of languages. |
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| -Neha Galhotra,Student, GRS, DU,This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it. |
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| CAREER GOALS |
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| I figured out my interest for teaching way back in my school |
I figured out my interest in teaching way back in my school |
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| I aim to become a Professor of French language |
I aim to become a Professor of the French language
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| I also take a few tuitions for French language in my locality. |
I also take a few tuitions for the French language in my locality. |
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| I have successfully completed the first two years of college. |
I have successfully completed the first two years of college.
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Extra spacing between ‘successfully’ and ‘completed’ |
| While studying various subjects in college like French |
While studying various subjects in college like French
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Extra spacing between ‘studying’ and ‘various’ |
| I have developed interest in creative writing, debating, translation, speaking etc |
I have developed an interest in creative writing, debating, translation, speaking etc |
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| …these skills that I have acquired during the years,also my aptitude and sincerity will enable me to do justice to your Summer Internship Project2018… |
…these skills that I have acquired during the years, also my aptitude and sincerity will enable me to do justice to your Summer Internship Project 2018… |
Spacing missing between ‘comma’ and ‘also’ |
I am keen to take up the Internship Project to gain some professional experience related to the field of languages
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I am keen to take up the Internship Project to gain some professional experience related to the field of languages |
Extra spacing between ‘professional’ and ‘experience’ |
I will work with the best of my ability and try the level best to provide you quality work.
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I will work to the best of my ability and try the level best to provide you quality work.
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Use of wrong preposition |
| -Neha Galhotra,Student,GRS, DU,This email address is being protected from spambots. You need JavaScript enabled to view it. |
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