ROMINDER KAUR ASSIGNMENT 1
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DRAFT VERSION
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CORRECTED VERSION
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TYPES OF ERRORS
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My Professional Profile
Hi, I am Rominder Kaur. I was born and brought up in Delhi. I completed my 12th in 2002 from Lady Irwin girls senior secondary school. I completed B.A. in 2006 from Delhi University and B.C.A. with first division in 2009 from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I am honest and hardworking. My hobbies are listening to music and net surfing. I think Modlingua is a good platform for me to gain some professional knowledge. Working as an intern is a great opportunity for me. I like to take challenges and learn new things. |
My Professional Profile
Hi, I am Rominder Kaur. I was born and brought up in Delhi. I completed my 12th in 2002 from Lady Irwin girls senior secondary school. I completed B.A. in 2006 from Delhi University and B.C.A. with first division in 2009 from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I am honest and hardworking. My hobbies are listening to music and net surfing. I think Modlingua is a good platform for me to gain some professional knowledge. Working as an intern is a great opportunity for me. I like to take challenges and learn new things. |
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My Career Goals
Goals are the most important thing in a person’s life, without them your life would just be plain and boring with no excitement at all. Without making goals in your life you would have nothing to look forward to, or even have anything to achieve. I always had a keen interest in computers. I studied science with computers during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject. I completed Bachelor of Computer Applications with first division from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I have been selected as one of the Summer Interns at Modlingua and I think it is a good platform for me to improve my skills and knowledge. I would like to be a part of a reputed organization having a team of highly qualified professionals and utilize my skills and expertise for the growth of the firm. |
My Career Goals
Goals are the most important thing in a person’s life, without them your life would just be plain and boring with no excitement at all. Without making goals in your life you would have nothing to look forward to, or even have anything to achieve. I always had a keen interest in computers. I studied science with computers during class 11th and 12th and have been considerably excelling at the subject. I completed Bachelor of Computer Applications with first division from Indira Gandhi National Open University. I know how to read, write and speak English, Hindi and Punjabi languages. I have been selected as one of the Summer Interns at Modlingua and I think it is a good platform for me to improve my skills and knowledge. I would like to be a part of a reputed organization having a team of highly qualified professionals and utilize my skills and expertise for the growth of the firm. |
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| Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 264 Total Number of Target Text: 264 |
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| Errors related to articles |
0 |
| Errors related to punctuation, symbols, signs and spaces |
0 |
| Omissions |
0 |
| Spelling errors |
0 |
| Choice of words |
0 |
| Factual errors |
0 |
| Choice of words and overall consistency of those words |
0 |
| An eye for details |
Yes |
| Page layout and overall presentation |
Yes |
Profile Photo Quality |
Not applicable here |
Additional comments if any |
No |
| Time taken to correct 264 words: |
10 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report: |
30 Minutes |
