| ERROR ANALYSIS RUBRIC FOR SUMMER INTERNS OF MODLINGUA 2018 |
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| My name is Binay Kumar Shukla, a resident of Kolkata, West Bengal, India. | Deleted | Not needed |
| I have a Post Graduate Degree in Sociology and Hindi, a Certificate course in Translation from Central Translation Beauro, Department of Official Language, Ministry of Home Affairs, Govt. of India. |
I have a Post Graduate Degree in Sociology and Hindi, a Certificate course in Translation from Central Translation Bureau, Department of Official Language, Ministry of Home Affairs, Govt. of India. |
Reduce space between two words i.e. from-Central. Spelling mistake-Bureau. Double Space between of-Home need to be reduced. |
| Apart from this, I have a Bachelor’s Degree in Alternative Medicine, Associate degree in Paramedical Science (IGNOU), Diploma in Security and HR Management. A had an association with the field of Medical Science for more than 24 years. | Bachelor’s Degree in Alternative Medicine, Associate degree in Paramedical Science (IGNOU), Diploma in Security and HR Management. A had an association with the field of Medical Science for more than 24 years. |
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| A love towards language and literature has attracted me towards the field of Language Translation. As of now, apart from pursuing a successful career as a freelance wellness consultant, I am deeply associated with translation work for Hindi/Bengali to English. |
A love towards language and literature has attracted me towards the field of Language Translation. As of now, apart from pursuing a successful career as a freelance wellness consultant, I am deeply associated with translation work for Hindi/Bengali to English. |
No modification suggested. |
| Career Goal The field of language is an ocean which is beyond the capacity of an individual to cross ahead; however, we as a language professional try to learn and apply the tool mixed with our skill in the development process of our own intellect. |
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It seems this sentence is unnecessarily used. |
| In a pursuit to learn new skills and secrets of language and its translation/interpretation into other languages, I have ventured into this profession and I am always in a quest to learn. |
In a pursuit of learning new skills and secrets of language and its translation/ interpretation into other languages, I have ventured into this profession and always in a quest of learninging. |
Grammatical error at the highlighted portion. |
| as much as I can and simultaneously with all the tools and skills I would try to bring the hidden wealth of literal and cultural properties of one language into another, which will create a common platform for a better human bonding through the bridge of language. | Deleted. | Unnecessarily used sentences deleted. |
| Error Analysis Total Number of Source Text: 245 Total Number of Target Text: 135 |
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| An eye for details | Lacked attention for details |
| Page layout and overall presentation | Adequate |
| Profile Photo Quality | Not applicable here |
| Additional comments if any | Apart from above errors, lots of improvement was done by omitting sentences in order to bring more clarity and coherence. A proper review is before submission of article is highly recommended. |
| Time taken to correct 245 words | 10 Minutes |
| Time taken to prepare this evaluation report | 15 Minutes |
